I like the angle on this

Well the angle could be good, but the "stone-fence" definetly should'nt twist towards right as it fars away

Captain Yorri Heldaran of the Nashoni, swordmaster royal at the Court of Chestermont, vassal to Count Duncan Moorcroft, Count of Chestermont and heir presumptive to the throne of Silvergate, was staring blankly into the vast beyond.
It is the great forest of the Thalboni area that clouded his view; the Clawpeak mountains were lined up far away to the north, forming a line of sharp mountain tops and crevices. If he only could, he would most certainly have flown away across the vast forest in search for Captain Arthur and his company. The Captain had the Count's son, Alaric, with him, even though Yorri had protested heavily on the choice. It was he, the royal swordmaser, who trained the young lordling in the arts of the blade, and he was his to worry about. His league would never forgive him if some grim fate was to befall the young count-to-be.
Yorri could only hope that the Captain's own skills were sufficient.